That looks good
Tracy recommends cutting out the dream feed in 3-day increments. This is so your lo can make up the calories during the day.
For example...(this is almost directly from the book:)
Day 1: Add 1 ounce to the first feed of the day, and take away 1 ounce from the dream feed that night. Give the dream feed (now 1 ounce less) half an hour earlier, at 10:30 instead of 11:00.
Day 4: Add one ounce to the first feed, one to the second and take away two ounces from the dream feed. Give the dreamfeed (two ounces less) at 10:00 (now an hour earlier than normal).
Day 7: Add one ounce to the first feed, one to the second and one to the third, take away 3 ounces from the dream feed and give at 9:30.
Days 10 (dreamfeed at 9:00) Day 14 (8:30) and Day 20 (7:30). By continuing every 3 days to add ounces during the day and take away the same amount from the dream feed, you end up doing a feed at 7:30 with only a few ounces.